Thursday, January 16, 2014

Shmall Shoe Shtory


Those tiny teeth shone through between the dimpled cheeks and the rosy lips. They were more than enough to make anyone lose their heart and fall in love with the person to whom those pearls belonged to. The muddy hands, the bruised knee and the dishevelled hair had their own tale to narrate.



How could she admonish him for losing one of the new sandals she'd lovingly bought for him when he says, "Maa I wash playing and forgoth tho thake the shoe...."




About Bhavya: 

I write to free myself, all the while trying to engage you a bit more, trying to learn from every step I take. A hopeless romantic and believer in fairy tales, books, friends, music and food soothe my soul and rejuvenate me like nothing else. Secretly desirous of being a world famous author, i weave tales on my blog about people, relationships and emotions. I blog at Ishithaa.
                        



                           Linking this to Jan 2014 Ultimate Blog Challenge, NaBloPoMo and Write Tribe Wed prompt. 


 



To read posts by fellow friends and UBC and NaBloPoMo participants, click here Jairam,Kajal, Kathy, Michelle, Nabanita, Richa, Suzy Que,Shilpa. 






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20 comments :

  1. UnknownJanuary 16, 2014 at 11:50 PM

    A cute little story! I'm also spending the week writing a bit of fiction. I'm glad I chanced upon your blog from the UBC challenge. Good luck the rest of the month.

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  2. AmritJanuary 17, 2014 at 12:27 AM

    that was so beautiful... I am glad i came across your blog...

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  3. Lynda LippinJanuary 17, 2014 at 1:06 AM

    I live in a family-friendly neighborhood, and every day I walk past one mitten, or one shoe, a tiny scarf, or small jacket. So cute!
    http://pilatesandreiki.com/diastasis-recti-pilates/

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  4. JairamJanuary 17, 2014 at 2:24 AM

    That was just simply such a cute post, no two ways about that :D

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  5. Red HandedJanuary 17, 2014 at 4:06 AM

    OH MAN!!!! The woman in me wants to go all "AWW"!!!

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  6. RajlakshmiJanuary 17, 2014 at 4:15 AM

    aww so cute :) lovely take on the prompt

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  7. ObsessivemomJanuary 17, 2014 at 6:57 AM

    What a Shweet little Shtory. Love the picture of the little boy you created.

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  8. AditiJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:18 AM

    Aww so cute...who can get mad at that! :)

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  9. RekhaJanuary 17, 2014 at 7:29 AM

    Cute little shoe story that was! :-)

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2014 at 9:17 AM

    Short and sweet take on the prompt !!

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  11. Mina MenonJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:41 AM

    Achooda - Am waiting for this to play live in my life :-P

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  12. SuzyJanuary 17, 2014 at 10:47 AM

    Aww that's sho shweet.

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  13. Shilpa GargJanuary 17, 2014 at 1:08 PM

    Awwwie.... sooooo cute!! Agree, who would say anything to such an angel!! ♥

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  14. NabanitaJanuary 17, 2014 at 4:55 PM

    Oh so sweet! I loved it...Thanks for sharing :)

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  15. UnknownJanuary 18, 2014 at 5:09 AM

    What a cutie! It would be hard to stay mad at a kid like that! ♥

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  16. Richa SinghJanuary 18, 2014 at 11:03 AM

    Awwwi <3 such a cute story :-)

    Richa

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  17. Aayesha S HakimJanuary 18, 2014 at 11:38 AM

    Aw! Shweet story :) ;)

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  18. sugandhaJanuary 18, 2014 at 5:43 PM

    Very sweet little story :)

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  19. Vishal BheerooJanuary 19, 2014 at 4:41 PM

    That's a lovely story. Enjoyed every word. Bhavya:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/01/18/wednesday-prompt-2014-3-the-perfect-winter-gift

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  20. payal agarwalJanuary 27, 2014 at 9:23 AM

    such a sweet story!:)

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