Monday, April 6, 2015

Eva ...


Eva walked towards him and stood silently looking at him. Five years ago, this was the day they stumbled into each others life. Even they didn't know when they became friends to soul mates from extreme strangers. 

Minutes passed and still the silence hang like an invisible veil between them. She wanted to talk about so many things and even about all the trivial parts of her life, but she knew she would be greeted with just silence. And silence between conversations is something she hated the most. After spending some more moments with him, she knelt down and placed the bunch of red rose on the grave and walked away with a tear in her eyes. 


Linking this with




at
Labels: , ,

26 comments :

  1. bettyApril 6, 2015 at 12:33 AM

    Oh poor Eva, to have such a short period of time with her soul mate and then such a long time of silence, wanting to share but knowing it would not be heard. Well written.

    betty

    ReplyDelete
  2. Shailaja VApril 6, 2015 at 7:57 AM

    Oh that was a sad ending :( How I wish they could have spoken a lot more before the end.

    ReplyDelete
  3. SuzyApril 6, 2015 at 8:57 AM

    Oh that's so sad. But why didn't she speak, I'm sure he can hear beyond the grave.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Nisha SanjeevApril 6, 2015 at 9:29 AM

    oh no!

    ReplyDelete
  5. VinithaApril 6, 2015 at 10:25 AM

    That's heart breaking.

    ReplyDelete
  6. RajlakshmiApril 6, 2015 at 11:02 AM

    ohh that's so sad :( Poor eva. Well written.

    ReplyDelete
  7. AnonymousApril 6, 2015 at 11:10 AM

    Oh that was sad :(

    ReplyDelete
  8. AnonymousApril 6, 2015 at 11:10 AM

    Oh that was sad :(

    ReplyDelete
  9. AnonymousApril 6, 2015 at 11:10 AM

    Oh that was sad :(

    ReplyDelete
  10. Prasanna RaoApril 6, 2015 at 12:17 PM

    Oh such a sad ending. Sometimes we realize too late that we should have spent more time with our loved one's. In the hectic grind of everyday life we take relationships for granted.

    ReplyDelete
  11. the little princessApril 6, 2015 at 1:13 PM

    so beautiful...and heart breaking!

    ReplyDelete
  12. Vinay Leo R.April 6, 2015 at 1:30 PM

    That was unexpected and a sad twist at that SSJ. :(

    ReplyDelete
  13. Swathi ShenoyApril 6, 2015 at 1:44 PM

    Oh God :( Didn't see that one coming! Poor Eva. Well written Sheethal :)

    Entrapped

    ReplyDelete
  14. UnknownApril 6, 2015 at 5:06 PM

    Nicely done. Enjoyed the ending.

    ReplyDelete
  15. Michelle LiewApril 6, 2015 at 5:39 PM


    A wonderful twist, Susan!

    ReplyDelete
  16. keiths ramblingsApril 6, 2015 at 6:27 PM

    So moving. A delightful if sad piece.

    ReplyDelete
  17. elly stornebrinkApril 6, 2015 at 8:54 PM

    Oh that sure was unexpected! Sorry to hear of Eva's friend's demise, though she could still talk to him as if he were there...perhaps he can hear and it might help to soothe her aching heart. <3

    ReplyDelete
  18. NibhzApril 6, 2015 at 9:02 PM

    Oh dear!! I never thought she was standing by his grave!
    Eclipse

    ReplyDelete
  19. Drusilla BarronApril 6, 2015 at 9:27 PM

    What a poignant story. I can't wait to read more. Visiting from A to Z,

    Drusilla Barron
    http://lovedasif.com
    http://glamofgod.com

    ReplyDelete
  20. Jeremy [Retro]April 6, 2015 at 9:36 PM

    You are on my list to check if you are being part of the A to Z Challenge.

    THANK YOU for being up to the letter "E"...
    Jeremy [Retro]
    AtoZ Challenge Co-Host [2015]

    There's no earthly way of knowing.
    Which direction we are going!

    HOLLYWOOD NUTS!
    Come Visit: You know you want to know if me or Hollywood... is Nuts?

    ReplyDelete
  21. AnonymousApril 6, 2015 at 11:46 PM

    I agree with the others...that was an unexpected twist.

    Just stopping by from the A to Z challenge.

    ReplyDelete
  22. AnonymousApril 6, 2015 at 11:54 PM

    I agree with the others...that was unexpected.

    Stopping by on the A to Z Challenge.

    ReplyDelete
  23. AnonymousApril 7, 2015 at 6:14 AM

    God! I didn't see that coming! Nicely written. Loved it, Sheethal!
    Sorry down with fever, hence the delay in visiting! Thanks for stopping by my space :)

    ReplyDelete
  24. Shanaya TalesApril 8, 2015 at 4:29 AM

    Gosh. I did not expect that end. So heartbreaking. :(

    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

    ReplyDelete
  25. Prathima RaoApril 8, 2015 at 2:36 PM

    Oh my goodness!! Kahani mein twist again here. Good one.

    ReplyDelete
  26. VinithaApril 8, 2015 at 4:42 PM

    Heartbreaking!

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments ( Atom )