Wednesday, November 6, 2013

That Three Words.


"I love you"...

"Why?"... she questioned back

"...I don't know... just love you."

She didn't say anything. But gazed out of the window to the moon. Moon. Her fantasy world. She was always amused by that unreachable destination. So beautifully cold and appeared differently everyday. She felt so near to it yet far. Like them? She wondered.

He was her childhood. They grew up together. Their folks were always in touch even when they kept away from one another. Would there had been any difference in them if they hadn't lost track? Maybe they would had a better definition for their relation. Maybe she would have turned out to be as someone else. More tuned in life.

Life always had that specialty of taking people away at the wrong time or giving at the worst. Or more else taking someone back permanently along with a part of us.

All sort of thoughts were going through her mind. Unsettled and disturbed she kept gazing out.
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20 comments :

  1. joefloggersNovember 7, 2013 at 1:19 AM

    very nice. I enjoyed reading it.

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  2. the little princessNovember 7, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    distant yet near like the moon...what a lovely comparison! nice story!

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  3. kalpana solsiNovember 7, 2013 at 4:16 PM

    One can see the moon but it's so far away. At times it's the same with relationships.A nice read.

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    1. UnknownNovember 10, 2013 at 11:24 PM

      Guess some relations are like that too. Thanks for reading :)

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  4. Ankur AnandNovember 7, 2013 at 4:51 PM

    Isn't it so true .. people never doubt when you confess hatred but when it comes to love they always or is followed by ques .. well written story :)

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  5. Michelle LiewNovember 7, 2013 at 5:13 PM

    Ah, the eternal problem of letting go!

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  6. UnknownNovember 7, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    How sad that she didn't feel that she could accept his love and had to wonder about it. Makes me wonder what happened next.

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  7. Corinne RodriguesNovember 7, 2013 at 5:32 PM

    Oh dear! A declaration of love can change a relationship for the worse - but then we'll never know until we dare to speak, will we?

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    1. UnknownNovember 10, 2013 at 11:26 PM

      We'll never know until we speak but at times speaking can make bitter situations too...

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  8. Richa SinghNovember 8, 2013 at 4:59 PM

    Something so elusive about the end... and yet something I can empathise with...

    Richa

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  9. Crystal CollierNovember 8, 2013 at 6:48 PM

    Mm. Conflict. I love me some conflict.

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  10. AnonymousNovember 9, 2013 at 4:15 AM

    Heart and mind...Beautiful!

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