Sunday, December 1, 2013

Will you...?




Sweetheart, With you I want to ...

Hold hands when it rains...
Love and pillow fight when it shines...
Sleep on your lap like a child during dark hours...
And everyday, want to kiss your forehead, look deep into your eyes and fall in love over and again.




Will you be mine?

Mmmmh.... yeah... but Conditions apply ;)





This is written for the Write Tribe's 55 on Friday prompt *Conditions Apply*




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17 comments :

  1. AnonymousDecember 1, 2013 at 3:16 PM

    Love it:)

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  2. Grace Grits and GardeningDecember 1, 2013 at 4:30 PM

    Cute. Nice dose of realism at the end:)

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  3. UnknownDecember 1, 2013 at 6:00 PM

    There are always conditions! Wonderful take on the prompt. Relationships can be so complicated.

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  4. AnonymousDecember 1, 2013 at 6:45 PM

    Oh no! I hate it when love comes with conditions. ;)

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  5. sugandhaDecember 1, 2013 at 7:21 PM

    Wow! it is beautifully written Sheethal

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  6. Reema SahayDecember 1, 2013 at 9:24 PM

    Nice! And conditions always apply. Most of the time we do expect something or the other.

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  7. Ruchira KhannaDecember 2, 2013 at 5:24 AM

    sure...materialism counts ;)
    good take, sheethal

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  8. AnonymousDecember 2, 2013 at 5:26 AM

    Isn't that just soooo true? Nice one :)

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  9. UnknownDecember 2, 2013 at 12:57 PM

    great work!! :D

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  10. UnknownDecember 3, 2013 at 3:02 AM

    Loved it!

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  11. UnknownDecember 3, 2013 at 6:41 AM

    Such a romantic poem with realistic ending. Great post.
    I have nominated you for the Liebster award. You can collect your award here.
    http://interestingthingsontheearth.blogspot.com/2013/12/my-liebster-award.html

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  12. NischalaDecember 4, 2013 at 10:52 PM

    Nothing is unconditional right? even though we think or say so! Enjoyed reading

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  13. Corinne RodriguesDecember 4, 2013 at 11:10 PM

    Hahaha....what fun, Sheetal. The poor partner! ;)

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  14. RekhaDecember 5, 2013 at 8:18 PM

    Oh yes! Conditions apply! :-)

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  15. Ankur AnandDecember 6, 2013 at 3:34 AM

    romantic but condition applied ?? :P

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  16. Karan ShahDecember 6, 2013 at 6:36 PM

    hehehe that is such a coincidence that many of us including me have had a similar take on the prompt...enjoyed reading it :)

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  17. Privy TriflesDecember 8, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Ah twist in the tale!! :)

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