“Unsaid
Words”
Met by coincidence
Came to
know each other by fate
Liked
each other by destiny
But
words remained unsaid
Thoughts
remained scattered in mind
Feelings
were unbiased
But
still
Silence
kept us together
Until
it took us to different paths …
Ohhhh. The unsaid can be so so powerful even more thanthe Said.
ReplyDeleteThere is something beautiful and mysterious about love that is not expressed!
ReplyDeleteI really like this - you could almost use it as a basis for a story.
ReplyDeleteCarol at My Writing Journal
The power of silence is often misunderstood
ReplyDeleteSigh... more emotions in those lines than in an entire short story. beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteMy entry for the #AtoZChallenge -
Underrated TV Shows that deserve more love
and the story would have been so different if they had expressed their love :)
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Twinkle Eyed Traveller
Sometimes silence is not so golden, is it?! Beautiful words!
ReplyDelete@KalaRavi16 from
Relax-N-Rave
Sad! Unsaid things never lead us anywhere :)
ReplyDeleteLove love every word written:)
ReplyDeletehttps://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/04/26/u-for-under-dog/
https://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2016/04/23/a-to-z-challenge-salirophilia/
Finding you first the first time on the V day of the #Challenge while out blog hopping from NC. Aren't you pleased that you have made it to the end! Enjoyed the several poems I read before hurrying on. If you have time or interest, I have been writing about hotels & inns, their architecture and architects, the setting where they are located. Hope to see you.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful, I really enjoyed it
ReplyDeleteDebbie