Seeing her daughter as a bride Priya felt her life complete. Her Pari has grown up and is off to built her own family.
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Twenty years ago, when Priya first stepped into Shishu-Bhavan she was not sure about what she was doing. All sort of questions and doubts were pondering in her mind. But the moment she laid her eyes on the beautiful two year old with twinkling eyes and a naughty smile nothing felt more right.
And after some hours of formalities, Pari became her daughter. And Priya in course of time bloomed into a beautiful mom under the shadow of her child's smile.
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Yayy!! I am so glad you did this girl!
ReplyDeleteAnd happier cuz you spoke of something very close to my heart.. yep.. adoption...that too a baby doll :) :)
You touched my heart with this story...
You made me do this :)Thanks to you :)
DeleteAnd now don't tell me that you too have a secret desire to adopt a baby doll???
Read what I wrote today :)
DeleteDone! :)
DeleteA nice story-line beautifully woven in limited words...Good Luck
ReplyDeleteThank you :))
Deleteadoption is such a beautiful and selfless deed !
ReplyDeleteGreat one
:)Thank you! :)
DeleteA child's smile is one of life's greatest blessings!!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful story! :)
Thank you :)
DeleteMy first attempt in 100 words... and all of yours comments do mean a lot! :)
Your blog is so lovely. and the story is so touching.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! :)
DeleteToo beautiful, simple yet worth gold:)
ReplyDeleteCheers
Vishal
Thanks Vishal!
DeleteThis is beautiful. I love this. There is no better smile than a child's for their mother. It is a blessing to treasure.
ReplyDeleteKathy
http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com
Definitely it's a blessing to treasure :)
Deletenothing substitutes the happiness a child brings along...
ReplyDeleteI second that!
DeleteChildren really do make parents bloom and keep them young too. Thanks for writing on my prompt. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks to you for such a lovely prompt. I enjoyed doing it.
DeleteHow you can make 100 words so complete is beyond me! Yet I could keep reading more! This was beautiful! So nice to see you at my site! It HAS been a long time...I hope you are well...I am recovering quite nicely and feeling better every day now. Its such a relief to feel better...its been too long feeling crummy...SOOOOO nice to hear from you! :) Zoe
ReplyDeleteIt was my first attempt in 100 words... was fun to play with words... I am doing good! Get better soon! And See ya around! :)
DeleteSuch a beautiful little story! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteYou have an amazing talent!
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Blush blush :)
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