Wednesday, February 5, 2014

How do I tell her about you...


How do I tell her about you .... the person who made me see the beauty of the world. Who made me realize that happiness is not something to be chased but it should happen spontaneously.

You showed me that life is all about moments and when one spend those moments with the person they like, then life seems to be beautiful and fun to live.

I wanted to show you the beauty of this world, but instead you made me see all those in your eyes.
How do I tell her about you... without falling in love with you, again.




Written for 100 Words on Saturday @Write Tribe



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32 comments :

  1. sulekkhaFebruary 5, 2014 at 4:55 PM

    It's a difficult thing to do but tell her he must :) lovely

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  2. Ankur AnandFebruary 5, 2014 at 5:04 PM

    nice :) .. you've written it for your mom i guess ?

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  3. Michelle LiewFebruary 5, 2014 at 6:40 PM

    Oh, my, torn between two lovers!

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  4. NikhilFebruary 5, 2014 at 6:50 PM

    Ahh , lovely insight Susan.
    The last line ..the way you concluded it, is the highlight..."How do I tell her about you...without falling in love with you, again"
    Subtle , creative ,lovely & a beautiful post indeed! :)

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  5. NabanitaFebruary 5, 2014 at 7:28 PM

    Nice...thanks for sharing....

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  6. Prasanna RaoFebruary 6, 2014 at 8:38 AM

    Lovely :) Sometimes honesty is good thing to stick to in a relationship :)

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2014 at 12:55 PM

    Beautiful. ....

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2014 at 2:18 PM

    Poetic and beautiful!

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  9. Shilpa GargFebruary 6, 2014 at 2:22 PM

    Two loves??

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2014 at 4:45 PM

    Very profound. It's a beautiful piece of work that can be felt within and difficult to express:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/02/02/100-words-on-saturday-14-5-how-do-i-tell-her-about-you/

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  11. Grace Grits and GardeningFebruary 6, 2014 at 5:22 PM

    This is lovely.

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  12. UnknownFebruary 6, 2014 at 5:29 PM

    Beautiful! Nicely written-) Yes, Life is all about moments

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  13. UnknownFebruary 6, 2014 at 6:30 PM

    Lovely take...sometimes it is awful hard to choose. I have never had more than one love at once. Glad I never had to choose. ♥

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    1. UnknownMarch 7, 2014 at 4:08 PM

      Choosing between two people is difficult.... but do we fall in love with a second person if we were actually in love with the first? Ok. Now I'm confused! ;)

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  14. PixieFebruary 6, 2014 at 7:41 PM

    ah yes.. its hard!
    Relationships and Love can be so complicated sometimes!!

    Nice take on the prompt.

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  15. Red HandedFebruary 6, 2014 at 8:17 PM

    And I am sure he tells her.
    This was beautiful!

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  16. Richa SinghFebruary 7, 2014 at 4:50 PM

    The prompt does evoke in all of us a story of torn between two loves, no?

    Richa

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  17. AditiFebruary 9, 2014 at 2:28 PM

    Poetic... Romantic... Lovely! :) inspired from where dear?

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