Monday, April 6, 2015

Eva ...


Eva walked towards him and stood silently looking at him. Five years ago, this was the day they stumbled into each others life. Even they didn't know when they became friends to soul mates from extreme strangers. 

Minutes passed and still the silence hang like an invisible veil between them. She wanted to talk about so many things and even about all the trivial parts of her life, but she knew she would be greeted with just silence. And silence between conversations is something she hated the most. After spending some more moments with him, she knelt down and placed the bunch of red rose on the grave and walked away with a tear in her eyes. 


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26 comments :

  1. Oh poor Eva, to have such a short period of time with her soul mate and then such a long time of silence, wanting to share but knowing it would not be heard. Well written.

    betty

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  2. Oh that was a sad ending :( How I wish they could have spoken a lot more before the end.

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  3. Oh that's so sad. But why didn't she speak, I'm sure he can hear beyond the grave.

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  4. ohh that's so sad :( Poor eva. Well written.

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  5. Oh such a sad ending. Sometimes we realize too late that we should have spent more time with our loved one's. In the hectic grind of everyday life we take relationships for granted.

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  6. That was unexpected and a sad twist at that SSJ. :(

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  7. Oh God :( Didn't see that one coming! Poor Eva. Well written Sheethal :)

    Entrapped

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  8. Nicely done. Enjoyed the ending.

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  9. So moving. A delightful if sad piece.

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  10. Oh that sure was unexpected! Sorry to hear of Eva's friend's demise, though she could still talk to him as if he were there...perhaps he can hear and it might help to soothe her aching heart. <3

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  11. Oh dear!! I never thought she was standing by his grave!
    Eclipse

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  12. What a poignant story. I can't wait to read more. Visiting from A to Z,

    Drusilla Barron
    http://lovedasif.com
    http://glamofgod.com

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  13. You are on my list to check if you are being part of the A to Z Challenge.

    THANK YOU for being up to the letter "E"...
    Jeremy [Retro]
    AtoZ Challenge Co-Host [2015]

    There's no earthly way of knowing.
    Which direction we are going!

    HOLLYWOOD NUTS!
    Come Visit: You know you want to know if me or Hollywood... is Nuts?

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  14. I agree with the others...that was an unexpected twist.

    Just stopping by from the A to Z challenge.

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  15. I agree with the others...that was unexpected.

    Stopping by on the A to Z Challenge.

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  16. God! I didn't see that coming! Nicely written. Loved it, Sheethal!
    Sorry down with fever, hence the delay in visiting! Thanks for stopping by my space :)

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  17. Gosh. I did not expect that end. So heartbreaking. :(

    *Shantala @ ShanayaTales*

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  18. Oh my goodness!! Kahani mein twist again here. Good one.

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