Sunday, December 1, 2013

Will you...?




Sweetheart, With you I want to ...

Hold hands when it rains...
Love and pillow fight when it shines...
Sleep on your lap like a child during dark hours...
And everyday, want to kiss your forehead, look deep into your eyes and fall in love over and again.




Will you be mine?

Mmmmh.... yeah... but Conditions apply ;)





This is written for the Write Tribe's 55 on Friday prompt *Conditions Apply*




17 comments :

  1. Cute. Nice dose of realism at the end:)

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  2. There are always conditions! Wonderful take on the prompt. Relationships can be so complicated.

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  3. Oh no! I hate it when love comes with conditions. ;)

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  4. Wow! it is beautifully written Sheethal

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  5. Nice! And conditions always apply. Most of the time we do expect something or the other.

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  6. sure...materialism counts ;)
    good take, sheethal

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  7. Isn't that just soooo true? Nice one :)

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  8. Such a romantic poem with realistic ending. Great post.
    I have nominated you for the Liebster award. You can collect your award here.
    http://interestingthingsontheearth.blogspot.com/2013/12/my-liebster-award.html

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  9. Nothing is unconditional right? even though we think or say so! Enjoyed reading

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  10. Hahaha....what fun, Sheetal. The poor partner! ;)

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  11. romantic but condition applied ?? :P

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  12. hehehe that is such a coincidence that many of us including me have had a similar take on the prompt...enjoyed reading it :)

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